Defying expectations,
She gave herself away;
Losing loyalty effortlessly
Holding onto something
So surreal…
Like the silence that bursts
Open into the dead of the night,
Talking to you like an old friend
So different, from the brilliant blue sky
Above the bright yellow marigolds
That smiles at you mysteriously.
But there was this magical faith which
Surpassed any fear that tried
To touch her…
Defying expectations,
She moved mountains.
I wish i could be that brave.
Copyright, Sevenstarhalo 2015.
Yours is a good poetry. It’s so simple but it speaks a lot. Best wishes to you and your blog.
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Dear Cathrine, many thanks for your comment! 🙂
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You’re welcome. 🙂
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you are that brave already 🙂
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Reblogged this on wwwpalfitness.
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Many thanks for the reblog! 🙂
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You’re welcome:)
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Bravo. Good poetry. Inspirational
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Many thanks! 🙂
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Bravery is momentary ,patience is long lived
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“The innocent and the beautiful have no enemy but time.” – W.B. Yeats.
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Agree completely
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Wonderful poetry… I love the picturesque language.
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Thank you! 🙂
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wow! so good
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Thank you! 😀
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All your poems are so beautiful, I can’t stop reading them. Great work 🙂
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Hello,there! Many thanks for your comment. Means a lot. 🙂
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That’s what we want
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Very nice. Thanks for your visit. Welcome back. 🙂
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Welcome! 🙂
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hey..many thanks for the comment. Glad to be friends! Cheers! 🙂
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It seems from your writeups you’re already that brave.
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:’)
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Applause. ❤
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Thank you. 🙂
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This is both beautiful and enigmatic, stimulates both Imagination and intellect and could only have been created by the mind of an Artist.
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Thank you! 🙂
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“. . . i wish i could be that brave.” We dont wish, just as yoda told us. . . ” Do.”
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