Let me take you back…
To yesterday,
Where a bunch of kids were running around
in circles, with nowhere to be.
In a place where
the autumn leaves,
detached themselves of the commitment
and embraced freedom.
Where the clouds parted ways
so the clear skies could bleed blue;
There was a man with a red cap
happy just to be able to
hold hands and walk.
And here was I,
amidst the melancholy,
waiting for a miracle.
Copyright, Sevenstarhalo 2015.
I wish to thank you for reading my poems and I have quite enjoyed reading your’s!
Best wishes!
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Hi! Thank you! 🙂
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You are very welcome!
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A general comment: thank you for deciding to let your eyeballs loose on my blog.
And it has led me to your blog with a canny eye for the less is best approach
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Hi, there! 🙂
Many thanks for the comment!
Patience is a blessing….! 😀
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Amen.
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Nice blog!
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Thank you! 🙂
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very nice to meet you!
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Hi, I nominated you for the 3 Days 3 Quotes Challenge. Have a great day.
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Hello! Many thanks for the nomination! 🙂
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Hey
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I’m really drawn to the leaves detaching themselves of commitment in order to float free. Insightful crafting. And the man in the red cap finding a better way to enjoy the moment–that is a challenge put across in an appealing way as well. You responded to my Christopher Robin poem, and I thank you for that. In turn I was shown the headline above for the article I’ve been happy to read. Well done writing!
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Hello, many thanks for the comment. Glad that you loved the imagery that I tried to depict in this poem. 🙂
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no loose ends….Broli was brought home from Halo Shelter three weeks ago, until today nameless
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I enjoyed reading your poems and yeah thanks for visiting mine.
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Thank you so much. 🙂
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I enjoyed this poem a lot. I agree with “clcouch123”, and will think of your poem when I see a leaf “escape commitment” next fall.
The three “M” sounds in the final two lines are wonderful. I spoke the lines aloud a couple times, rolling them around in my mouth like a fine wine.
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Haha! Fine wine. I like that! 🙂 Thank you!
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The truth is always obvious, but we need voices like yours to remind us that we must not forget this in our every day life’s.
Beautiful thoughts , thanks so much!
J.
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Dear J,
Thank you for your comment! Glad to know that you could relate to this. 🙂
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